Original: My job requires changing air filters and topping the car with engine oil.
New: I can change air filters and top the engine oil on all kinds of cars including imports, SUV's, and luxury cars.
Original: From Nov 1, 2005 - April 15, 2007 Worked for InfoSys
New: Nov 2005 - April 2007 Worked for InfoSys
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Original: Answer incoming calls and pass on requests to the appropriate person.
New: Answer approximately 50 calls a day, and 70 calls on peak days to pass on requests to the appropriate person.